By Bea
Moose ville
lose ville
seusse ville
Matoose ville
I think I like
them all but oh
I don't no if I'd want
to go. balls go bouncing
into boll ville all the
whos go into who ville
the cat in the hat
that knows allot about that
is going inside and taking
his rat!I think
all the people in
ratooth ville are
taking every
mooth that they
find inside their
house for the night what a
right fight
good night!
Bea, I love how you took some characters and places from Dr. Seuss's stories and put them into your own original poem. Great job with the rhyming and silly words!
ReplyDelete-Ms. Grojean
I liked how you took Dr. Seuss's characters and towns form his stories and put them into yours. And I also liked how your rhymed a lot.
ReplyDeleteFrom, Gary
Bea, I feel the same way as Gary...I love how you took lots of Dr. Seuss ideas and put them in to your own writing. You did a lot of creative thinking for this poem.
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
Great poem, Bea!
ReplyDeletefrom, Mary's mom
We're so proud of you, Bea. We're glad to see you're having fun with words! Love, Mom and Dad
ReplyDeleteYou did good with your rhyming words!
ReplyDeleteKatie
Hey, Bea. This is so fun. It has such a great rhythmic feel that while I was reading, I kept imagining a troop of Seussical musicians thumping and tumping and bumping along.
ReplyDeleteBea I really like how you used a lot of rhyming words
ReplyDeleteI really like your story
your friend anna
Dear Bea,
ReplyDeleteI really like your rhyming words and I really like the viles
love,
Lele!