Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Red and green apple

by Ava
red apples are groan in fredfers farm and green are groan in places apon thars
green apples are good but I would prefer red apples insted
do you like appless as much as I do
at the zoo
with a monkey from Peru
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7 comments:

  1. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 6:39 AM

    Hey Ava that was so funny I loved it!You are great at making funny poems.I'm your fan!

    -Amelia

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  2. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 10:06 AM

    Ava, I really like how you asked a question in your writing. That really helps hook your audience. : )
    Love, Mrs. Armstrong

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  3. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 3:56 PM

    Ava, great work coming up with rhyming words. This is a fun, silly poem.
    -Ms. Grojean

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  4. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 31, 2011 at 4:00 PM

    Dear Ava,
    I love how you used funny words.
    I love how you used a name of a place.
    I love your story!
    Love
    Bea

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  5. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 31, 2011 at 4:24 PM

    I love your story! I do like apples allot!
    Katie

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  6. Mrs. Armstrong's classApril 1, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    I like green apples

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  7. Mrs. Armstrong's classApril 1, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    -naod

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