By Justin
One day,somebody named Mac
once went to a store to buy a snack
then he went to go home
when he found out it was made of fome
so he went off to the zoo
and so he came back with a shoeand now he is so insane
he went to go buy a mane
then he bought somenails
then he put them on sails
Iwant to finish the story
butI can't show all of its glory
Great work, Justin! The way your character acts is very funny. I like your rhyming words too.
ReplyDelete-Ms. Grojean
justin I really like your story I like the rhyming words and its super funny your story is so good i cant described it!!!
ReplyDelete-clancey
Justin, I love how you used rhyming words and I also think it was great how you decided to have lots of short lines in your writing. It even has some rhythm to it. That is the best part about being a poet, YOU get to decide how you want it to look and sound.
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
You did a good job! you used lots of rhyming words
ReplyDeleteKatie
Hey, Justin. Fun poem. You've got a great rhyme pattern going in here. I could just see the meerkats skrattling around in rhythm with the words.
ReplyDeleteNatalie's Mom
Great poem, Justin! This poor fellow sure did a lot of things! You did a fantastic job on this one.
ReplyDeleteMrs. Caldwell