Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Dog in the hat

By Hallie

It was one realy hot sunny day it was to hot to play outside.  There were two twinns named  Saly and Maly.   Maly said it was to walkama hot to play outside.  Saly mound.  In one  cubilyon second someone knocked on the door.  Saly opened the door.  HELLO screamed the dog in the hat.  Who the fluws are you?  I am dog in the hat!
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4 comments:

  1. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 29, 2011 at 6:05 PM

    Hallie, I liked how you used The Cat in the Hat to help you with your poem. Nice job on turning it into your own idea. Good work!
    -Ms. Grojean

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  2. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 6:43 AM

    I like the way you made up silly words.therre is only one thing that I need you to tell me what walkama.I likem how you made it your own version Great work
    Theano

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  3. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 12:35 PM

    Hallie, I like you wrote your story to have a character named the Dog in the Hat. : ) I also want to know what walkama is!

    Love, Mrs. Armstrong

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  4. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 31, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    I like how you did dog in the hat instead of cat
    in the hat!Katie

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