By Amelia
It was Christmas day! The Jungle of Nool, Mc Elligots Pool, Whoville and everywhere else people and zeople were getting presnts.They had Christmas breakfast then the whos sang there song around the song, bong, long, kong, nong Christmas tree!The Jungle of Nool bouncing.And so was Mc Elligots Pool!Everyone including zangas and bangas and kangas where dancing in the captiol in the Jungle of Nool!Kocool! Then they headed to Mc Elligots Pool in bonkers and whappes and chokarades! They watched the fishes huge as balbas show!It was great! Dinglehoppers, toloots, zigabes, chegedes and don't forget firecolors (fireworks) when they finshed the bookas and lookas and zegees and bewees all made a great parade of clapping so the fish and bish took a great big bow and the lookas and bookas yelled with a roar PARTY TIME!And the wangos danced the zango it was the best Christmas ever!
Amelia, I love your very original story! You really put in a good effort to use rhyming and silly words. The celebration in the story seems like fun...way to go!
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Amielia I love how your story is funny and I like how it's original : from Arianna.
ReplyDeleteAmelia, That sounds like a very special celebration! I like how you used some of Dr. Seuss' ideas and some of your own. I especially like the silliness.
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
Very good!
ReplyDeleteKatie
"Zangas and bangas and kangas"! Wow, what a great gathering of glorious beasts. The fit right into the land of Dr. Seuss.
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