Tuesday, March 29, 2011

The Belly Heart Gurls

By Eliza
On the feilds of Haron Hart there were these creatures called The Belly Heart Gurls.Some had hesarts on their bellys and were pink,but some had none upon their bellys,they were just plain.They never got tok do anything with the gurls with hearts.They didn't get to havecupcakes and cookies,milkshakes and goodies.They just watched them play and play all day every Tuesday and Thursday,and every Sunday and Monday.Yep, that's what they do,they sit there and sit ther and have nothing to do.Then one day there came an odd,odd person.All the belly heart gurls that didn't have hearts said"who are you,where did you come from,please let us know.""We are creatures that have a star upon our bellys,but some have none upon thars,we live in Mars and eat jelly out of jars".The plain belly gurls liked them and they became best friends forever and never noticed the belly hear gurls again.     

6 comments:

  1. What a funny story, Eliza! I really like your creative, orginal idea about the Belly Heart Gurls. Great rhyming words too!
    -Ms. Grojean

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  2. Eliza, I really liked your story. It reminded me of Dr. Seuss! You are a very creative author!

    Love, Mrs. Armstrong

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  3. I really like your story!!!It has some rhyming
    words to.
    Katie

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  4. I really like your title Eliza!
    you are very creative!
    Bea

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