by Sarah
There are very small things but the smallest of all
is the very small ziellon. And he`s always on stilts, because he`s so small he`s only 3 inches tall and that`s all!
He only has a very small amount of hair and he wears it straight up so, he`s always in his
apartment, 308! And he just sits there, bouncing a yo-yo.
Never going a single so-so place! Then one day he was taken away in a zaelions balloon
and he flew to the top of a mountain. And now he just sits there, bouncing a yo-yo
and he`s stayed there, not able to go up nor down
So now you know, don`t be lazy!
Sarah, what a creative idea for your story! I can just picture the tiny little ziellon bouncing his yo-yo. Great rhyming words too!
ReplyDelete-Ms. Grojean
Sarah I LOVE your story! Its ALSOME funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hallie
ReplyDeleteSarah, Your story could be the start of a great movie! I think lots of people would love to know more about the little ziellon. I want to know what it looks like. : )
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
Dear sarah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a lot of ryming words.
I won't be lazy!
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Bea
You have a great ability to be descriptive while you're creating your rhymes! The image I got of these little 3 inch, crazy-haired, stilt-wearing creatures was amazing.
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