By Eva
In the city of pototal there was a girl named Evtotal and her sister Lydtotal. The two pototal sisters always wanted to see new sights. So one day they set out to the jungle of nool to swim in the cool of the pool with Hortan. Then after their favorite swim suits were done swiming Evtotal said '' lets's do this ever day''. ''Sure'' said Lydtotal. But the next day their mom said'' the pototal people should have a holiday called pototal day''. '' But mom'',said Lydtotal . ''No buts about it''. When their mom left, Lydtotal said '' don't we already have 12 of those.'' ''Yup'' said Evtotal. ''Let's go to the jungle of nool and live there''. ''Okay''. ''Okay''. And thats how the pototal sisters got to see new sights.
Eva, I love that word "Pototal." It sounds like you used yourself and Lydia as inspirations for the other names. I also like your silly words.
ReplyDelete-Ms. Grojean
I really like the names Lydtotal and Evtotal and also pototal. You used yours and Lydia's names.
ReplyDelete-Mary
Eva, I knew right away who Evotal and Lydotal were. : ) Your story is very imaginative. I wonder what the jungle of nool looks like, and do monkeys live there?
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
Good job, Eva! Cute story, love the made up words!
ReplyDeleteBea's mom.
Love it!I agree with Mary! WELL DONE!
ReplyDeleteKatie
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG IT WAS SO CUTE??????????????????
ReplyDelete-Tea'zjah