By Nicholas
1 square 2 squares . Red square blue square. I see squares everywhere. 1circle 2circles. Orange circle yellow circle. I see circles everywhere. 1 triangle 2 triangles. Purple triangle rainbow triangle. I see triangles everywhere. I see shapes everywhere!
Nicholas, I really like how your poem has such a nice rhythm to it. It reminded me of One Fish, Two Fish, Red Fish, Blue Fish. Great job using Dr. Seuss as your inspiration!
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I like how your story have alot of rhythm and makes sence I like yourm story form teazjah
ReplyDeleteNicholas, I love your poem. It could even be a poem for math. It is true, we really can see shapes everywhere. I think the form you used to write the poem was perfect. You used repetition and that makes the audience feel your emotions.
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
I enjoy your story and agree with Mrs. Armstrong
ReplyDeleteKatie
I love the image I got in my mind when I was reading this. So many shapes. So many colors. So much to see!
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