Tuesday, March 29, 2011

zooz

By Clancey
do you know about whos? then you must about zoozThey live in the island of zoaz.They slep on there knees they say everything with zs.The zooz king is frog and they love the fog! The zooz they live in the dark there pet  is a yark. And  they always get along and there  three inc. long! They don't where a boot but there realy cute and how do I know this me myself not a who but a zooz.
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6 comments:

  1. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 29, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    Clancey, I love your funny, made up words! Great job getting your words to rhyme too. I really like the part about the zooz saying everything with zs...that made me laugh.
    -Ms. Grojean

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  2. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 6:41 AM

    Great job with the z`s,Clancey!
    Your poem is really funny. Your a great rhymer too. The frog king is so funny!...Ha ha!
    -from Sarah

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  3. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 31, 2011 at 5:41 AM

    Clancey, Your poem makes me want a zooz for a pet! I like how you thought of your own creative ideas for your writing. I think your poem is wonderful!
    Love, Mrs. Armstrong

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  4. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 31, 2011 at 4:36 PM

    Your poem is so cute!!!!

    Katie

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  5. Amy HuntleyMarch 31, 2011 at 9:32 PM

    I love the way you played with the letter "z." As far as I'm concerned that letter is way too neglected in our language. Thanks for giving it some exercise!

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  6. Mrs. Armstrong's classApril 6, 2011 at 10:24 AM

    Dear Clancey,
    good job with the z's.
    I love your story it's so funny!
    From
    Bea

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