Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Berries

By: Katie

Berries and berries of all different kinds
Collect them and eat them
They're perfectly fine.
Pink, yellow, orange, and red
I like them so much
I eat them on my head.m
I have a long tongue it's black an it's blue
With red poko dots and white ones too.
This is me Katie Moeder reporting to you
Of how you can eat them and little ones too.
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5 comments:

  1. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 29, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Katie, what a funny poem! It really reminded me of something Dr. Seuss would have written. My favorite part was about eating them on your head. Great job!
    -Ms. Grojean

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  2. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 6:31 AM

    I like how you rhymed so much that was
    so cute!!!!I loved that peom so much
    now I'm so hundry!!!!!!
    love Hadley

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  3. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    Katie, I think you wrote a FANTASTIC poem. You really followed the type of writing that Dr. Seuss used with silly words and actions. I love all the adjectives you used in your writing.
    Love, Mrs. Armstrong

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  4. Amy HuntleyMarch 31, 2011 at 9:22 PM

    Wow, Katie. I could really see those tongues! You described them so vividly (and creatively).

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  5. Mrs. Armstrong's classApril 8, 2011 at 9:29 AM

    Katie,

    THAT WAS SUCH A CUTE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!:]
    I loved how you said at the end this is Katie Moeder reporting to you.
    you friend Eva:]

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