The storms are comming over sea,over peaks now on the land. Lightning bolts comming from Zuses hand. Evil sperits are comming. And dark and light meet a battle begins!
Fritz, you did a great job allowing the reader to picture what's happening in your poem. I got a clear picture in my head of the scary storm coming. Nice work! -Ms. Grojean
Fritz, you did a great job allowing the reader to picture what's happening in your poem. I got a clear picture in my head of the scary storm coming. Nice work!
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Dear friz,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used strong words and I love short storys the shorter the better!I love your story!
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Bea
Fritz, I agree with Bea...you used very STRONG words in your writing. That is a great way of capturing your audience. Way to write!
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
I can't wait to here more about the battle!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Bea too!
Nice work,
Katie