Tuesday, March 29, 2011

The Town In The Sea

By Insaan

                       Once in a sea so lonly lived a animal named Mr.Frony. He lived in a cave and all he could eat
                        was a lilly ly lave . Before there was a big town until came the lilly ly low he was the one who
                        owend his hoard of lilly ly loney.Everybody wanted it but it cost too much so they tried to
                        run him out of town but he ran them out of town.Ever sence then he's been Mr.frowny and
                         keeps his lilly. ly. loney!  
                       
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5 comments:

  1. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 29, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    Insaan, I really like how you used alliteration in your poem with all of the l's. You also came up with some good silly words. Great work!
    -Ms. Grojean

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  2. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 6:24 AM

    I like how you used aliteration and I like it to

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  3. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 6:34 AM

    -Naod

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  4. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 30, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    Insaan, You used so many poetry skills that we studied! Way to go! I love the silliness of your writing.
    Love, Mrs. Armstrong

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  5. Mrs. Armstrong's classMarch 31, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    Dear insaan,
    I love how you used a funny name!
    I love all the alliteration too!
    I love your story!
    Love
    Bea

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