by teazjah
I am zig I own this land my gal aninabell she is also my cousin and best friend in guss vill in guss land I well make a cake if it is tueday or wenday we laugh and play and have lots of fun it bring out the good of evey one people sleep in steets and even sleep in trees you forgot its her birthday I got you a gift its chaclent
Te'Azjah, nice job using rhyming words in your poem. Talking about cake in your poem made me want to bake a chocolate cake. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteTe'Azjah,nice work! You used veary good rhyming words!(But next time try to have it make more seince.)
ReplyDeleteNice Work,
Henry
Te'Azjah, I love how you used rhyming in your poem. I think it is so funny how you wrote about people sleeping in streets and trees. : ) You did a good job writing this.
ReplyDeleteLove, Mrs. Armstrong
Wow! That is a great, crazy Dr. Suess poem, Te-Azjah! It was a lot of fun to read--thanks for writing it.
ReplyDeleteMrs. Caldwell